And the next step is done, Clark will become Superman. I'm curious to see how Lois will react to the alter-ego in this verse. Canon Lois hadn't really seen Clark before he created Superman and it could be expected that she'd see the flashy hero more than the normal guy.
Here in your story she is a bit nicer to Clark from the beginning than she was in Canon and the two already share a friendship.
Also their talk about Luthor was nice. Clark could explain himself and his dislike of the billionaire without Lois thinking he is just jealous.
I also like the pace you set with Clark telling Lois about his life. It fits very well.
