Queenie, this is amazing. I'm so glad you came back to this, and also that you added in the TOC. I apparently left off somewhere around chapter 13 before, so it was like I got a whole bunch of new chapters!
very well done! I love Michel and how he's made some assumptions about Clark and Lois based off what he thinks he saw.
if anything more happened, he might have gotten an eyeful.
Can't wait for more!!