Hey, Mouse! I understand about promises and posting schedules. With a tale this rich with angst, WHAM, and WAFF, though, I think we'll cut you some slack.

Nothing like an armed robbery to entice the readers to come back for the next episode. You're really pulling out all the stops here. I'm glad that Lois has agreed to see Bernie, although I wonder if he'll also be treating her for a gunshot wound.

Yes, you would be that cruel... evil



Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around.

- Stephen King, from On Writing