Love it! You've humanized Scardino! No small feat... I got it when he said Lois reminded him of someone, but I love that you kept it subtle still. Very well done. I also like that from Dan's perspective he sees Clark as the wrong guy for her, because without knowing the whole story, he kinda looks that way.
I'm not sure if I've 'humanized' him but maybe gave him a little bit of perspective and depth? It was really hard to get in his shoes. He comes off as .... I don't like him.
Anyway, glad you liked it.
You did a great job with it! I actually felt bad for Dan!
Wow... If I can do that then that's saying something... lol
