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Bruce would get his revenge. He would use every trick in the book to get his revenge on Luthor even if it meant breaking up a set of reporters. Bruce Wayne was very fond of the brunette reporter and he might even have a job for her in another city if things went his way.

Yikes. Is Bruce taking over as the villian? What act of revenge could make him want to destroy a couple whom he doesn't know? Better still, what makes him think Lois would work for him after destroying her life?

OK. Ready for the next part. grovel


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.