Very interesting take on the romance.
I think Lois still has a secret or two that she hasn't shared with Clark, although if that's true, she will soon enough. I like the way you've painted her as being vulnerable and tough as an old boot all at once. And bringing in Henderson to be her contact in the PD is a nice touch. I wonder now if, when they go undercover as a married couple, they will decide not to end the "fake" marriage because it isn't "fake" anymore. And how much more trouble can Lois get into with only two parts left?
Wait, was that a silly question?
