Tracey, I really appreciate your comments on this part. The reveal can be tricky. I didn't want to make it too easy, but I also didn't want to make it too hard. Lois has felt like Clark is his best friend her whole life, after all.
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I'm liking the Henderson of this world - his interaction with Lois was fun.
His interactions with Lois in any universe are usually fun. His participation in this story has been a lot of fun to write. Glad the 'jelly doughnut' made you giggle. Me, too.
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It's not easy to bare yourself completely to someone, especially someone that you care so deeply about
No. It isn't. For those that had a rough childhood, like these two, it's even hard for people that have been together for years. The emotional connection is what makes a relationship, but it can be so hard sometimes to get there.
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Just gorgeous. I think I got a little teary.
Aww. And yay! clap
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I was all mushy, and now I'm back to yay-for-rapidly-disappearing-clothing!
This made me smile. Thanks for your feedback on this part. Part 11 is coming right up.