I love the historical accuracy you've added throughout this story. Pizza's history in the U.S. and sulfa instead of modern antibiotics are two examples in just this one chapter! 
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Cuidadora
"Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor
"A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly
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