Cute story. I liked seeing Keith again. (I assume that this is the Keith from the post-Byrnes-era comics?)
One question. Toward the end of the story is the line
Lois took each of her children by the hand and the four of them slowly headed to the parking lot.
I'm not sure where four came from. Depending on whether or not you count the unborn twins, I count either three or five people from their family walking to the parking lot. (Clark isn't with them.) Am I missing something?
Joy,
Lynn
