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“I apologize. Next time I go too far...”


Lois apologized? Didn't see that coming but she is different from cannon Lois so anything goes. I like that she saw where she messed up and admitted fault.

Yes! This is one of the things that had to happen in this story. Lois had to be different from the one in the originial universe. Glad you like her.

Last edited by Morgana; 03/28/17 03:13 PM. Reason: Additional comments
Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.