I loved it! It's much more logical this way... but it would have cut short the "Lois can't see what is right under her nose" plot, so...
I always wondered how the Kents could reach Metropolis, and how they could afford to come so often to Metropolis (Superman can'( fly them all the time!) I'm not complaining because I adore the characters, but your approach is very very nice.
I also love the fact that Lois was investigating this...
I almost expected this Lois to pull a Margot Kidder stupid move (as in, jumping out of the balcony) to force Clark to react and to remember his powers! Yours was a more ingenuous solution...
I'd love a sequel, or even better, more than one!
