Hi! Just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed your story very much. Well, frankly, up until the moment where 'Doomsday' was thrown into the plot. Don't get me wrong, I am not criticising the use of the character. But since I am mostly familiar with LnC you just lost me there somewhere along the way.
Other than that, it was a great idea to have Tempus use Lois as a weapon against Clark. He is right in that department, she really is the only person who can break his heart as thoroughly.
It was tragic to read that she understood Tempus' true intentions so very late.
Just like 'Newsworthy' it was a good, but tough read.
Great writing.
