This story keeps getting better and better. I love the insight you give into both Clark and Lois' thoughts. Hopefully Lois will come to terms soon with her own insecurities (which is an ironic thing, as she presents herself so confidently) and Clark will let her know that this 'perfect' illusion that Lois has concerning him, is just that-an illusion. Lois needs to see he has flaws in order to be able to accept him. I like that you have Clark at a loss as to what to do. How do you tell somebody you're not perfect (not even human) without sounding horrendously egotistical? Keep it up!


Spike: "There's a hole in the world...feels like we ought to have known."
-Angel