Ralph is a moron. How did he think he'd have time to snoop around in Lois' computer when she was theoretically going to the supply closet? How far away could that possibly be? Seems he's not even smart enough to recognize unacceptable risk.

I like that many people are at work in this story - it's not just Lois and Clark that are involved. You've weaved a complex tale, and I appreciate the time and effort you've taken in crafting it.

P.S. Hope Dan isn't as annoying in this universe, for Mayson's sake. wink


You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie. wink