Once again I am excited that you posted some more - and so soon. Keep it up!
This one was much better written. Although the readers still do not know the purpose, there is an apparent one looking. This piece explained more than your previous parts. For that, I am very greatful, and more interested than ever.
More ASAP. My school starts soon, do not keep me waiting too long.
PS. Think of it as a back to school present, to a very loyal and intruiged friend. LOL!! Now I am just poking at you.
