Just wondering, have you been to Zurich or have you just researched it? I love the details you put into Lana's wondering through the city.
Having worked on this chapter I was not surprised at Lana succumbing to Daae's charms and lifestyle. Actually anyone reading the earlier chapters probably should not be terribly surprised as Lana is nothing if not a social climber.
I am glad you allowed Catherine and Arthur to become a couple and kept it real instead of the caricature that most stories provide of their relationship.
Mike