Just wondering, have you been to Zurich or have you just researched it? I love the details you put into Lana's wondering through the city.

Having worked on this chapter I was not surprised at Lana succumbing to Daae's charms and lifestyle. Actually anyone reading the earlier chapters probably should not be terribly surprised as Lana is nothing if not a social climber.

I am glad you allowed Catherine and Arthur to become a couple and kept it real instead of the caricature that most stories provide of their relationship.

Mike


Create all the happiness you are able to create.
Remove all the misery you are able to remove.

Jeremy Bentham