Cindy,

I am loving it so far. The detail is extremely good from the explosion blowing Lois into the ocean, to her 'collection' of the bottle, to Superman's rescue of her, to her experiments and I especially love the detail you put into Lois' experiencing Clark's side of the rescue. With Clark's depressed state when he returned I can only assume that one or more of the victims did not make it. That always seems to depress him even though he saves numerous victims that would have died if he had not shown up. He evidently has no idea that Lois is inside his head. I can't wait to see what Lois puts together and when she puts it together.

Mike

Last edited by Mike M; 06/20/16 01:56 PM.

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