How you managed to make this both convincing and interesting is incredible. And you never cross the wrong lines (IMO).
Haven't you wondered why there are so many great tragedies in human literature and art? Many have been inspired by Guardianships gone awry
Interesting theories abound, but I like how you make them all so plausible within this context.
just because someone is chosen for an angel once, that they will be chosen again
Do I hear "sequel" here? Okay, maybe not.
I mean, I've never been naturally angelic
LOL.
His opinion is not unlike your own
Lois and God. Unbeatable team, that.
It would be as close to heaven on earth as it was possible to get.
Nice line.
the path to peace lay in the heart and soul of a mortal
Another nice line.
Have I mentioned that I really like this story
