That was a perfect last line notworthy.

Awwww--I loved this. Such a fun Alt. Beginning story, I'm such a fan of those. This Lois and Clark are such a great fit for each other--you can really tell how easily they both know 'something' is there between them. I really enjoyed how Martha and Jonathan noticed it, too smile.

Great job!
Laura

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"Where's Clark?" "Right here."

...two simple sentences--with so much meaning.

~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~