I have not been commenting on each chapter but have been faithfully reading. I love the differences between them and canon. Only comment I have is that you did not come back to the canon Lois and Clark at the end of this chapter like you had in the rest of the chapters. I was waiting for their peanut gallery comments. I really like the way you portray the Montreal version of Lois, her artificial self-confidence breaks down much quicker that canon Lois. Her description of her first experience with sex in Montreal was both humorous and heartbreaking at the same time. The hiking the skirt up and pulling the panties down (not off) and the logistical difficulties that produced was humorous the result was just as heartbreaking as the canon Lois' experiences. Clark has to work much harder in this universe to convince Lois that she is very attractive and does not need to hide that beauty.
Nice job on the story. Will we see these two again? You like the concept of story series so I suspect so but just wondering.
Mike
