Hi Mike,

Thanks for the FDK!

Originally Posted by Mike M
What did I think? Well we finally see the cracks in Lois' resolve a bit (colliding with Clark and both being buck naked will do that I suspect). You are moving the relationship along a bit faster now. I suspect that Trask will move it along even further and faster if it is anything like the GGGOH episode. I anxiously await how you make the confrontation with Trask fit with the universe you have created here. This is always the stuff that interests me the most with your writings, how much is stays the same and how much and what changes.

Great little story you have going here. Keep it up!

Mike

I'm glad that it has kept your interest.

The relationship is progressing, but keep in mind, this Lois has a different motivation.

There are some more twists and turns yet.

Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks"

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