Good luck with your internet problems. Sounds frustrating!
I was wondering where you would go next with the revelation in the first part. There was still a truth for Lois to figure out!
I had forgotten about that. When you got to Lois crawling into bed, it felt as if THAT revelation was a twist. Good job!
I'm glad Lois realized that writing an article on Clark Superman Kent would ruin his life, even if it did get her the award she's been coveting for years.
Fun story!
