Good wrap-up to the story...all loose ends accounted for.
You've left it with a positive vision for the future of this universe.
I plan to wait for a board moderator or someone at the archive to let me know if I can post it there before I submit it for inclusion.
Why? Because it was an alt-universe? Because it didn't end with Lois and Clark as a couple? There are other stories in the archive that fit both of those criteria.
Certainly not everyone will like every story that is posted here. You guided many potential readers away by your very clear warnings at the beginning - a move I agreed with, by the way. You needed readers to be open to the alt-universe you were creating, and if I hadn't been forewarned about the darkness, I truly believe I wouldn't have enjoyed it as much. So I appreciated your warning, and I'm glad I gave your story a chance. Not every story has to be WAFFY and romantic...sure, those will probably get more readers and feedback, but that doesn't mean they automatically have more artistic merit.
Be confident and proud of what you created. It was unique and original, and those aren't bad things.
