Very vividly descriptive part, even with its cold, methodical detachment. She's so dispassionate about everything else at this point in her life, which makes me wonder how truly passionate she is about actually killing Rodolfo. She's gone so far down such a dark path, it's doubtful she can ever come back. frown


You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie. wink