Loved the idea of the Justice League, particularly the justification for assigning newbies to work a shift...get rid of the hero worship right away! Oooh...that racist comment shocked me - appalling! If the warning radar hadn't been blinking yet, surely that has got to clue people into the fact that something dramatic has happened to Lois during her lost years. And the reflexive reaction to being touched says a lot, too. This story certainly has my attention...I'm eagerly awaiting more.


You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie. wink