Wonderful job notworthy.

I've really loved these stories--getting to know the residents of Metropolis. And Mystique (I had no idea what her name was, either) was a great choice.

I echo what Virginia stated--your retelling of ASU was done really well. You gave the episode a lot of life, and it added in wonderful ways to your story clap.

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“I … ah … that was me. I was looking for … for clues,” he said.

I almost groaned. Did all his excuses sound this bad?

rotflol. LOVED this! And have to agree--that is one horrible excuse, Clark wallbash.

Thanks for sharing--very much enjoyed your tale smile
Laura

"Where's Clark?" "Right here."

...two simple sentences--with so much meaning.

~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~