This is a very interesting concept. Unlike in Nan's epic Home series, this isn't Lois reincarnated. This woman, Lauren, was alive at the same time as Lois. I could definitely sense a resemblance to her great aunt Lois, though. Stubborn, fiery, with a heavily emotional undercurrent. She blew into Clark's life like a strong punch to the gut. I love how she automatically went to Aunt Lois's friend Clark when he mentioned his name. ( thumbsup on his new surname of Jonson, no "h" like his father.)

The question is: What will Clark do now? Will he "run" into Lauren again? Will he be able to move on, as Lois requested, and live again, love again, with Lois's great-niece? Or will the ghost of Lois be too strong and he give up the apartment and move on, elsewhere? Does Clark Jonson have a real life? A career? Can't wait to find out! Great start, KK. clap


VirginiaR.
"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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"clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.