Feedback folder for Betrayal.
A few things...
I just want to say thank you to everyone who is still reading these (and commenting on them). Without you all to spur me on, I doubt I would have written a sequel to At First Sight, let alone started writing a series.
This one was a bit more difficult than Tainted. As I've said before, writing a story from Clark's POV about a Lois-centred episode is just a bit harder. I struggled to find an angle. I did contemplate putting in something about Perry being so close to the scoop of the century when he's in Clark's closet... all he had to do was trigger that hidden panel... But it just didn't fit. Still, that scene always amuses me.
Anyway. Vatman next.
Feli.
