Originally Posted by LMA
I was a little worried, too, during the fight. It was not looking very good for Clark there for awhile. You've put some extra 'edge' into Corbin--really good writing, DC.

I absolutely loved those moments together back at Clark's apartment. It was so nice to see them getting back on the right track, settling in to being in love. Lois witnessing the fight really gave her perspective--and I'm so glad that she acted on that perspective right away.

Looking forward to the next part--as always smile ,
Laura


Thank you! It's was oddly fun to write for Corbin! I do enjoy writing the occasional fight scene, so overall, this was an interesting chapter to work on.

This Lois is pretty smart to act on her perspective and immediately seek out and apologize to Clark. Plus, it's just so much more fun to write them together and not apart!

Battle On,
Deadly Chakram

"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent

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