Wow!
Wow!
Wow!
Seriously, Corrina, this part was amazing! So much suspense. Suspense written with so much feeling, so much emotion.
You could really tell how defeated, how scared, Clark is feeling. And how desperate Lois is to make things right again. I was so absorbed, I read this section originally as fast as I could--completely caught up in the story. Then, because I was really wanting the story to continue, I decided to read it again--more slowly, catch every wonderful detail. I really am loving the feel to this story. And I am so curious how this time in 1996 is going to play out...and how it'll effect
now.
Can't wait for your next post. I'll be on the edge of my seat until then
.
Laura
