This is just so much fun, and I absolutely love your portrayal of Lois. I just love to love Lois, and in your story she is so, so lovable!!! Hey, everything here is so light-hearted and sweet, like a hugely WAFFy comedy. So original and feel-good! And all the little verbal quips and funny observations. Like when Lois tries to watch TV in the Lexor honeymoon suite, all that is on anywhere is couples embracing! And then when Clark calls her when she's taking a bath, and she just spots a shady deal going on in the building opposite and she just grabs the binoculars she brought along the way other women would bring their lipstick. I love it!!!
Ann