Cool poem, Susan. I like it!
And great part, as usual, DC. Love the reality that you have brought into this story. The doctor's appointment, the confusion that Lois is still feeling.
Being a mother, the time at the doctor really brought back memories. Seeing the ultrasound. Seeing the baby. It's amazing.
And probably (pretty predictably
), I loved all the beautiful WAFF btw Lois and Clark in bed. Even though the secret is between them--even though Clark snuck out during the middle of his night holding Lois to do a rescue--the closeness and love they share was so evident. You've done a great job of showing that progress in a natural way throughout the story.
Though unlikely, I was hoping for good news for Clark from Dr. Klein. It was heartbreaking for him to hear otherwise. To know that the baby he already loves probably isn't his. To know that having a child in his future isn't as likely. And now, to know that all alone.
BUT--like was stated in the story, even though crazy-small, there
still is a chance that everything could work out the way that Clark is hoping. And, with Lois and Clark, we know that anything does seems to be possible
.
When does he tell Lois all of this news? When does he tell her his secret? Oh-my-goodness, I am dying to know
...
Laura
