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"Please? Tell me. Do you know who I am?"
That sounds like something someone with amnesia would say. I realize that this isn't ASU, but please tell me he doesn't have amnesia. I hope he was just asking whether he recognized him as being Clark.

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What had hurt him?
I guess her memories from OL don't include Clark's views of his dual personae or his wanting her to fall for Clark rather than Superman.

There's only one part left. Somehow, I doubt the air will be fully cleared by then. How far along are you with the sequel, and do you have an estimate of when you'll start to post it? (No pressure, you understand -- fanfic writing should be fun and not something with deadlines of any sort. This paragraph is not intended to pressure you, merely to let you know how much I am enjoying this story and looking forward to the next one, whenever it may come out.)

Joy,
Lynn