Great part, KK
I really enjoyed getting a glimpse of a couple things...
First off, definitely WAFFy that Lois is noticing the 'benefits' of Clark editing her copy--it was sweet how she was anticipating how kisses from Clark would feel. And I'm sure Clark was thinking about the same thing
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Also, finding out about Lois' early career at the Planet was great. Thank goodness for that dog, huh?
And then there was more about Paul--and then what happened with Linda. How Lois knowing Clark is 'out there' somewhere, at some time for her, gave her perspective...and helped her move on from any thoughts of her college editor. I love that
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Oh--and I also really enjoyed that Lois called Clark--how she actually heard his voice and got confirmation of 'him'. That little, brief connection together--even though Clark had no idea who was on the other line--is very romantic.
Really excited to read the next part. That conversation they have in the warehouse (from the pilot) is one of my favorite scenes. Very curious to see what you create from it
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Wonderful job
Laura
