Well, these two kids sure do move fast!
Though, there seems to be a scene missing...surely you've written something between Lois unbuttoning her shirt and the two of them lying in bed together.
Come on now, Clark, you give Lois a tasty sample of your Clark Bar, then expect her to starve for another seven years?
A woman has needs!
I didn't write nfic at this time. It was only the second fic I'd ever writen and I didn't attempt nfic until way after this. Even now I don't attempt it very often and I think it can sometimes be a bit tame. I'm too shy to really 'go for it', but I have still crossed the line so it can't go in the gfic folder either. *shrugs*
