I really enjoyed that. Lois' rants even made me laugh out loud a couple of times. Clark's introspection and Lois' dialogue rang true to me. I liked the references to the Pheremone spray and grinned at Clark's need to take laps in the Arctic over the memory of Lois' dance. And of course we have the revelation.
I take it that's just part one of a multi-chapter fic, right? Glad you've decided to post! I look forward to seeing what happens when Mad Dog Lane springs back into consciousness.
