I loved this chapter. The back and forth, the new meshed with the original script perfectly.
The reference to OL (Old Lois?) caught me a bit but I knew who you meant but unknown to Lois she hit the nail right on the head timing wise with her seemingly off the cuff comment.
This means there are two concurrent stories exploring how the first season would have played out if Lois and Clark's link up had been significantly accelerated. Ken's series about them getting married in GGGOH and now the Destiny series here where Lois knows who he is even before HE knows who he is. This will be interesting to see how she (Lois) handles it going forward, so far it seems the only time when she looses her balance in the tightrope she is walking is when the jealousy gets going. I also have no idea how far you plan to take this, Ken is committed to completing the first season but he seems to be considering taking it further.
Things will definitely get interesting and confusing for Clark in this series.
Mike
