Well, I sure had to read this the second I saw it post this afternoon! You've really got me curious, wondering what will happen. Hoping all is fine.

I totally agree with Mike. You have enough 'hospital' info in the story to seem realistic, but also, it doesn't get in the way at all with the story of our characters we love so much. Great balance--really impressive clap.

Glad that you are posting quickly--wanting to make sure everyone is ok.

Love you writing, KK notworthy
Laura

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"Where's Clark?" "Right here."

...two simple sentences--with so much meaning.

~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~