In complete agreement with all of the above.

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Even though he couldn't fly himself, Grandpa helped me to learn to control my flying. He and I will help you, too. And don't worry too much that you can't control your flight path yet. That will come with practice. If you ask Grandpa about how poor a navigator I was when I was first learning… Well, he'll tell you that it could never be said that I couldn't hit the side of a barn. Poor Bessie and Bluebell experienced quite a shock that night; fortunately, neither was hurt, and I repaired the barn at superspeed.

How kind to mention that Jonathan had a big hand in helping him learn the rudiments of flying, even if he could not do so himself. Poor Bessie and Bluebell! Did it take awhile for them to give milk again?

Thanks for this lovely little short! smile1

Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.