Fantastic. I was pretty certain that he would come out of the time tunnel earlier than Lois, so that he could be her saviour throughout her life.
I loved that she ran into his arms, even though she was concerned he might not feel the same. She can't resist him.
I chuckled that their agreement to go slow lasted only till later the same evening ... but I'm a bit disappointed you didn't describe this wonderful breaking of the agreement!
So, what's your next story then?
