Hi Deb,

Thanks for the FDK!

I agree with you on the science errors and I have corrected some of them, but if I corrected them all there wouldn't be any story. I decided to leave most of it intact. There was a lot left out and no good explanation for some things so I have added here and there and also tried to explain some things. Hang on, I think it will be a fun ride.

Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks"

My stories can be found here

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