Different Revelation:

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“Are you saying you think you’re some kind of alien?” Lois asked.

“I know I am,” Clark said.

“Did you ever see the machine your parents were talking about?” Lois asked.

Clark shook his head. “Mr. Schuster sold it to a travelling circus.”
shock

He sold the rocket to a circus? How come Jonathan didn't get there first? Very different from Trask stealing the ship.

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Clark stared into the direction of the explosion, looked back at her and then sighed.

A moment later he wasn’t there. It was as though he’d vanished into thin air.

I can see the resigned look on Clark's face, his life was about to take a detour such as he never imagined before.

Yup, this part did end with a bang! shocked


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.