In total agreement with VR. Lois is not thinking like a member of a team, there is more involved with a happy marriage than a spa tub. But they are literally in the honeymoon stage of the relationship.

This is one of the problems with them being married so early, despite H.G. Messing with her memories. They haven't had real time to work together as a team. frown

Lex saw her kissing Superman? help

Good thing he didn't have a camera!

By the way; the closing line was one of the best you've ever written! I can imagine Lois standing there wearing that outfit. Poor Clark! love


Last edited by Morgana; 09/07/14 08:15 AM.
Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.