Well the story just keeps getting better and better. You really are doing a great job at unveiling the story layer by layer. I suspect we all know where they will end up (at least we hope they do) but that is immaterial compared to the journey you are spinning for them.

Many times I check the ending of the story to determine if I really want to read it as I am not hugely into bad endings as some people are. To me knowing where the story is going is not a problem because as far as I am concerned the journey is the meat of the story and the meat on your story is USDA Prime.

Thanks for writing this one.

Mike


Create all the happiness you are able to create.
Remove all the misery you are able to remove.

Jeremy Bentham