Please bring Lois back or at least give Clark something more positive to think about than recurring nightmares! grovel

This is a fabulous story! Lots of angst, action, and intrigue for three books. You have been posting for nearly a year and it still feels like there is a LOT more to come.

Matilda has been through havoc and back. Surely her brother must have understood why she acted the way she did and love her for all the sacrifices she has done to keep him and the remmants of her family alive. Sam does not sound like much of a brother.

Why do I get the feeling that her child is alive?

Marcius is more than what he appears to be on the surface. Clark was given quite and education from Haver that evening. Nothing is as it seems for the Capitolites or the folks in the districts.

A house of cards ready to collapse.

Snow is a real snake.

Clark needs to turn to his writing...




Last edited by Morgana; 07/16/14 09:50 PM.

Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.