This was a nice story. While not a huge fan of Smallville over the years,my affection for Erica Durance's portrayal of Lois brought me into the fold during the final years.
Your characterizations of Lois, Clark(the meathead), Oliver and a bit of Chole seemed consistant with what we saw in the episodic time you set your story. It was an interesting way to have Clark 'come clean' with Lois even though, if I remember right, Lois found out about Clark before he actually told her. Lois' have a way of doing that.
Cute story, feel free to visit this world again.

Tank (who has often freely admited that Erica's Lois is only second to Teri's and not by much)