Hi JediLady,

Great first vid - I wouldn't have guessed smile

You picked a really good song, and I love how you matched those slightly ironic lyrics with nice scenes throughout, many of which I have rarely seen used in vids.

Some scenes I especially liked:

- Lois with the flipper for "my kitchen says my bread is molded".

- Clark's auditory overload for the "blown-out speaker".

- "been jaded, I been dusted" - Lois throwing flour at Clark in the kitchen.

- Clark ruining the cushion, the feathers flying (always loved that scene)

- the disco ball stopping just above Lois's head.

- women chasing Supes, Superman's mug shot, Clark ruining the house with his powers, ruining the laptop with his speed-typing

- all those crossbows pointed at Lois

- the swim-suit shot (which ep is that from, btw?)

Generally loved how you contrasted those "I've seen better days"/LnC in distress scenes with the nice "been the star of many plays" scenes (Kerths, etc.). It worked really well.

Congrats and I hope you'll keep on vidding,

Eva


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