well there's nothing left to say! I also loved it! The way it switched from Lois point of view to Clarks very nice done!
There olso a clip of this song sung by Melodie Crittenden at loisandclarkarchive.com but ofcourse it's different goofy I liked that version but as I said I LOVE your version too!!!!!!!

"I have no regrets. If you regret things, then you're sort of stepping backwards.
I'm a believer in going forwards." ~Kate Winslet