I was offline when you posted this one, too, so I haven't had a chance to comment yet...

But... thank you so much for letting me see this a few weeks before posting! <bg> So you already know how much I love it, and I still can't help going 'oh, wowowowowow' every time I see it. I know you said you wanted that the viewer would be left with the impression of a very dark fic, and you succeeded all the way - so get up on stage, I'll get you a medal and we'll all have cake, 'cause this was pure perfection! Wow!

Pelican (chocolate cake sounds good, yeah?)


Such a little thing really, a kiss...most people don't give it a moment's consideration. They kiss on meeting, they kiss on parting, that simple touching of flesh is taken entirely for granted as a basic human right.

Susan Kay