Nicely thickening plot, and hurray, another potential ally!
I'm glad to see Lois wrestling with the soulmates aspect (I don't like it either
)as well as the alarm of trying to protect CJ's secret. Great introspection, too, when she realized that the thrill of the chase isn't so much fun on the other side!
Again, this reads much too quickly. That's because it's so good.
So hurry up and give us MORE!
Hazel
